HELP!!

hi guys, Mikala here.

so we have this English assignment, and we have to write a story. I have finished my story, so I showed it to my tutor, my mum, my close friend and my best friend, and they ALL liked it. But when I showed my teacher my story, she HATED IT!!!!!!
I have no idea what to do. My teacher knows what she is talking about cause she is a teacher! But everyone else really liked it. So I don't know what to do with it!

Please leave your advice in the comments!